隨著文章的結(jié)束,文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Helping the Policeman(幫助警察)”的結(jié)尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy。再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
2、首尾呼應(yīng),升華主題
在文章的結(jié)尾可以用含義較深的話點(diǎn)明主題,深化主題,起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng))”的結(jié)尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it。
3、反問(wèn)結(jié)尾,引起深思
這種方式的結(jié)尾雖然形式是問(wèn)句,但意義卻是肯定的,而且具有一定的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用,可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (學(xué)英語(yǔ)能為我們帶來(lái)許多樂(lè)趣)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don't you think learning Eng-lish is great fun?
4、表達(dá)祝愿,闡述愿望
這種方式的結(jié)尾常出現(xiàn)在書(shū)信或演講稿的文體中,表示對(duì)他人的祝?;?qū)?lái)的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農(nóng)民們的一封信)”的結(jié)尾可以是:I hope the farm-ers' life will be better and better。
另外,書(shū)信的結(jié)尾常有以下形式的祝福語(yǔ):Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。
如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.② 對(duì)于論述性的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭處先闡明自己的觀點(diǎn),接著展開(kāi)進(jìn)一步的論述。如“The Time and the Money (時(shí)間和金錢(qián))” 的開(kāi)頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……2、回憶性開(kāi)頭 在描述事件或游記類(lèi)的文章中,采用回憶性的開(kāi)頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。
這種類(lèi)型的開(kāi)頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯,如never forget(永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法忘記)、remember (記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、exciting(令人激動(dòng)的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad (難過(guò)的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭還以這樣寫(xiě):I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或 It was really an unforgettable experience I had.3、疑問(wèn)性開(kāi)頭 在敘事類(lèi)或論述性的文章中,都可采用疑問(wèn)型開(kāi)頭,這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(種樹(shù))”的開(kāi)頭可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is …… 再如“Traveling Abroad(出國(guó)之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?4、倒敘式開(kāi)頭 在有的文章,特別是敘事類(lèi)的文章中,可以采用倒敘的寫(xiě)作手法,先寫(xiě)出事件的結(jié)果,再陳述過(guò)程。
如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開(kāi)頭可以這樣寫(xiě):I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It's a 。 story.二. 英語(yǔ)作文結(jié)尾四方式1、自然結(jié)尾,點(diǎn)明主題 隨著文章的結(jié)束,文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。
如“Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)”的結(jié)尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。2、首尾呼應(yīng) 升華主題在文章的結(jié)尾可以用含義較深的話點(diǎn)明主題,深化主題,起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的效果。
如“I Love My Hometown(我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng))”的結(jié)尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it.3、反問(wèn)結(jié)尾,引起深思 這種方式的結(jié)尾雖然形式是問(wèn)句,但意義卻是肯定的,而且具有一定的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用,可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (學(xué)英語(yǔ)能為我們帶來(lái)許多樂(lè)趣)” 的結(jié)尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don't you think learning English is great fun?4、表達(dá)祝愿,闡述愿望 這種方式的結(jié)尾常出現(xiàn)在書(shū)信或演講稿的文體中,表示對(duì)他人的祝?;?qū)?lái)的展望等。
如“A Letter to the Farmers(給農(nóng)民們的一封信)”的結(jié)尾可以是:I hope the farmers' life will be better and better.另外,書(shū)信的結(jié)尾常有以下形式的祝福語(yǔ):Best wishes. I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year. I wish you have a good time等。
如:如何修飾一個(gè)最簡(jiǎn)單、最常用的“說(shuō)”?我們就可以寫(xiě)出許多:say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently) 還可說(shuō)say some thing in a friendly way。 替換了一個(gè)副詞,生動(dòng)地表達(dá)了說(shuō)話時(shí)的不同心情。
擴(kuò)詞有:play football——play foot ball in the play ground—— play football in the play ground with my friends—— play football in the play ground with my friends after school。 對(duì)其中的動(dòng)詞我們還可替換成playgames,play the piano…等,后面的狀語(yǔ)都可以有相應(yīng)的更換。
又如:a friend—— my friend——my close friend——my close friend named Mary。 以此類(lèi)推,我們可以模仿著進(jìn)行擴(kuò)句訓(xùn)練。
The students love life?!?The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch。
為了避免句型的重復(fù),我們還可以轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型,來(lái)表達(dá)同一內(nèi)容。 如:The dictionary is so big that it doesn't fit in tomy pocket。
—— The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket?!猅he dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket。
.has both advantages and disadvantages.……既有利又有弊。例如: 1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages. 2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. 3.Com pared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. 舉一反三: 1.Although computers bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages. 2。
.has many advantages.For example,。However,just as every coin has two sides,。
has its disadvantages.(本例將利弊分開(kāi)講,轉(zhuǎn)折過(guò)渡自然。just as every coin has two sides也很值得背誦。)
II。.play(s)an important role /part in。
……在……中扮演重要角色/起重要作用。例如: 1.Computers play an important role in science and technology. 2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life. Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies. 3.Education plays an important part in developing our mind. 4.Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness. 舉一反三: 1.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life. 2.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication.But now ,telephone,email,fax have taken their place. III.With the development of。
隨著……的發(fā)展,例如: 1.With the developm ent of our econo- m y,m any Chinese fam ilies can afford a car. 2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious. 3.With the rapid development of science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home. 4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed. 舉一反三: 1.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is becoming more and more serious. 隨著中國(guó)人口的急劇增加,住房問(wèn)題越來(lái)越突出。 2.With more and more women entering society,people's attitude towards women is changing. 隨著越來(lái)越多的婦女走入社會(huì),人們對(duì)婦女的態(tài)度也在改變。
3.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up,an increasing number of Chinese families can afford a car. 隨著中國(guó)改革開(kāi)放的深入,越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)家庭買(mǎi)得起車(chē)了。(“越來(lái)越多”除了常用的more and more外,還可以用an increasing number of, a growing number of,a significant number of,a great number of等來(lái)表達(dá)。)
IV.When it comes to。,some people think /believe that。
,others argue /claim that opposite /reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but。當(dāng)說(shuō)到……,有些人認(rèn)為……,但另一些人則持相反的觀點(diǎn)……。
這兩種觀點(diǎn)可能都有點(diǎn)道理, 但……。 本結(jié)構(gòu)先用when it comes to 。
引出話題,再用some。others。
這個(gè)對(duì)立的結(jié)構(gòu)引出了兩種相反的觀點(diǎn),然后說(shuō)There is some truth in both。表明嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)公正的態(tài)度,最后用but。
很自然地引出了自己的論點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)看下面這個(gè)例子: TV,a good thing or bad thing When it comes to TV,some people believe that it is extremely valuable,as it provides relaxation, entertainment and education. Others argue that it is harmful for it begins to control our lives and deprives people of time to do other activities.There is probably some truth in both sides.But we must realize that television itself is neither good or bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society.。